Avoiding Common Admissions Essay Mistakes

MooCowPoopPoop · November 25, 2014 at 7:56 pm

Thank you so much for this video! I would be lost without it. I am starting my common apps this week!

Edmond Niesen · April 1, 2015 at 3:07 am

Ah! UVA, where where you live determines your fate

katelyn ast · September 1, 2015 at 2:06 am

I’m 13 and going into freshmen year but i really want to get into med school I’m obsessing so much right now!!!

Nicolas Lopez · November 3, 2015 at 2:40 am

Come on Dartmouth

Lil Toto · May 7, 2016 at 10:32 am

really helpful…..

Linda Marie · August 27, 2016 at 1:43 am

Really helpful!

aesthetic kobi · December 20, 2016 at 11:10 am

Ayt I got a head start

Anand S · February 24, 2017 at 6:13 pm

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I hope you like it.

Unravel · June 10, 2017 at 6:35 pm

I remember a teacher told us how this kid wrote about how he admired Hitler in his essay, and he got accepted in this Ivy League school with scholarships. Must have been a darn good essay.

Lucas M · August 4, 2017 at 11:05 pm

Gosh. I don’t even know how to begin on the personal essay. 🙁

Jaiprakash Shukla · October 24, 2017 at 6:47 pm

I wrote about my struggle in trigonometry. Is this common topic or it is unique?

Tori Kye · November 18, 2017 at 10:27 pm

Currently in the process of writing my college essay’s. Good luck to everyone else applying to college! Hope you get in 🙂